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Elaine White's Life in Books

I love reading, and as a writer I like to broaden my scope by reading outside of my comfort zone, so that I can learn more about my craft.

Currently reading

Baron of Blood: 1 (Dawning Era Series)
C. N. Faust
All Our Foolish Schemes: The Creepers Saga Book 2
Raymond Esposito
Fright Radio
Noel Dandes
A Dark Heart (The Elders and Welders Chronicles)
Margaret Foxe
Prince of Hearts: The Elders and Welders Chronicles Bk. 1
Margaret Foxe
Young Love Murder (Young Assassins 1)
April Brookshire
Before the Full Moon Rises: 1 (Chronicles of the Secret Prince)
MJ Bell
Once Upon a Darker Time
M.J. Bell
Guardian of Souls
Lee Appleby
In the Beginning
Abby L. Vandiver

Vampire Wars

Vampire Wars - Anthony Renfro A good idea, unique approach. Could be a very interesting book, if expanded upon. Some minor issues such as when someone speaks it's represented as -

Person : speech

And sometimes, there is a descriptive sentence straight after the speech, with no definition that it is not part of the speech. Some sentences would sound better strung together, rather than separated as well.

My other issue, is that there are explanatory remarks placed into brackets within the story. Sometimes they disrupt the reading, at others they would work better without the brackets. The most interrupting brackets are those that say - (person from part 1/3). If the readers can't keep track of the characters by their explanations, give them names.

Overall, an enjoyable read, a great idea and very promising. I look forward to reading more by this author.