Elaine White's Life in Books
The Author
Elaine White is the author of multi-genre MM romance, celebrating 'love is love' and offering diversity in both genre and character within her stories.
Growing up in a small town and fighting cancer in her early teens taught her that life is short and dreams should be pursued. She lives vicariously through her independent, and often hellion characters, exploring all possibilities within the romantic universe.
The Winner of two Watty Awards – Collector's Dream (An Unpredictable Life) and Hidden Gem (Faithfully) – and an Honourable Mention in 2016's Rainbow Awards (A Royal Craving) Elaine is a self-professed geek, reading addict, and a romantic at heart.
The Reviewer
I’m an author and reader, who just can’t get away from books. I discovered the MM genre a few years ago and became addicted.
Top #50 UK reviewer on Goodreads
#1 reviewer on Divine Magazine
Vampire Wars
A good idea, unique approach. Could be a very interesting book, if expanded upon. Some minor issues such as when someone speaks it's represented as - Person : speech
And sometimes, there is a descriptive sentence straight after the speech, with no definition that it is not part of the speech. Some sentences would sound better strung together, rather than separated as well.
My other issue, is that there are explanatory remarks placed into brackets within the story. Sometimes they disrupt the reading, at others they would work better without the brackets. The most interrupting brackets are those that say - (person from part 1/3). If the readers can't keep track of the characters by their explanations, give them names.
Overall, an enjoyable read, a great idea and very promising. I look forward to reading more by this author.
